Wow, what a poem!!!
Alghebah….You did something no body experienced before, it is astonishing and really impressive!. You have unique way in connecting and arranging words and ideas, even Shakespeare would not be able to do it in such way!. Going through this poem, I feel that you are very accustomed to English language as you are with Arabic, and you are an excellent poet as well. To me, it is not effortless task to write down such a poem and those who are capable of writing such one are counted up on one-hand fingers if they are not less.
Anyhow, I heartily wish you all success, and well done!.
Saqer