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I Don't Know "My First Writing"! Your opinion
Much has been said about my knowledge
But I really don’t know! Time has allotted us a bracket We mold the sculpture or we crack it. Life’s better days sets us up for bitter rage. I don’t know. It’s not how the game is played, Its how the claim is made. On your thoughts that have ought to be bought Without flowing tears sought. Tell me a positive thought! I don’t know. They say that love is better than love lost But I fail to see the opportunity cost. Every day a coin is tossed but the truth hides deep in life’s moss. Will it be heads, will it be tails, Life has more than just two trails. Down which one you will go? I don’t know. By: Yasmeen "Punk Princess". Hope you liked my first writing! After all, I'm just a beginner! And you're the experts! |
nice writing
i wish i can write....lol |
Not like I know how to write! Believe me try to write about your life, people opinions, something happened today! And It will be a song or a poem!
If a KID like me can do it! Then you can do it! Thanks cuty_N_jeddah. |
PS: The last 5 lines were written by Scott, my teenager stupid goofy friend!
*Cause he have just gave me a warning if I didn't say the those 5 lines were written by him, he is going to kill me! And he says that my writing aren't so good also even for a beginner! Ugh!!* |
hi
I would say this is a good start
Thanx Yasmeen for sharing your words with us By the way Scott is doing fine as well Take care |
Thanks Wad al-wed for your lovely reply! You know that your replies make me really happy! I don't know why * that line fits with the poem maybe I should add it to it!*.
Scott didn't write the whole poem! He only wrote a few lines. ;-) If it wasn't for me he wouldn't write one line! You do only suffer in the beginning of writing. You don't know how should you start, or what to start with! It is a big problem at first, but then you get used to it with time! Even turn back to writing whenever you feel like it! |
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Hi my fellow! First of all, That's cool. From a talented boy like you to like my writing! maybe I should be a writer someday! .. Thats shows how much your opinion mean to me ..!! My supporter friend. Second : Wow! Maybe "WE" should open a contract together for a book!! Just kidding! Your writing reminds me of the sisters band .. I think it called The Corrs?! Yup, the same style.Which shows that you're really a talented boy! That's awesome! Thanks for passing by. |
I told you befor....
how nice it's..... hey..... guys you know what?? Punk..... is a great girl With anice personalety.... so........ say thanx to her....... your sis/ ØíÝ ÇáÍÞíÞÉ |
*Cheeks got red, looks down!*
Wow! Thank you ØíÝ ÇáÍÞíÞÉ This is too much! I'm not the perfect! I may not be what you want me to be, all I want is for you to see, I am not always proud of myself. I always make mistakes, which is not great! So don't tell the lovely members that am a great girl! They may expect more, they might think that am the nicer, lovelier, preferable person ever! And that is not me... I'm trying to be more modest, and some people think that I'm over-proud of my self! And also snobbish! And you're making it clearer, so please I wouldn't expect anyone to call me GREAT! Nobody is GREAT but Allah, that's one of my mom's sayings! Thank You My spectacular friend! |
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